I really like the composition of this piece and the values are working well. I would add more variety to the shape of the smoke and make it more wispy (softer edges) and ethereal. Maybe look at reference for incense smoke? Good job!
Rachel I really like the composition you have transitioned too. I think the lamb looks a little awkward. It seems like he is leaning on his right legs. maybe if you shifted his direction like he was facing the star more?
I really like the composition of this piece and the values are working well. I would add more variety to the shape of the smoke and make it more wispy (softer edges) and ethereal. Maybe look at reference for incense smoke? Good job!
ReplyDeleteRachel I really like the composition you have transitioned too. I think the lamb looks a little awkward. It seems like he is leaning on his right legs. maybe if you shifted his direction like he was facing the star more?
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Hillary, the lamb looks a bit lopsided, as if his left legs are ever so slightly longer than his right legs. Otherwise I like it.
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