Hey Amanda! This idea is super cute. I like it a lot. :) As for the composition, I think you could use a little more action in their movements. Both of the ghosts in the foreground look a bit stiff-- I think you could push the idea a little more and make it look like the little ghost is really trying to get away at top speed, and the parent ghost maybe has to try a little harder to nab the little ghost. And then I would also crank up some of your darks; everything is looking very middle-grey. I think you could benefit from upping the contrast between the white of the main two ghosts and the background around them. I'm excited to see the final product!
Hey Amanda! This idea is super cute. I like it a lot. :) As for the composition, I think you could use a little more action in their movements. Both of the ghosts in the foreground look a bit stiff-- I think you could push the idea a little more and make it look like the little ghost is really trying to get away at top speed, and the parent ghost maybe has to try a little harder to nab the little ghost. And then I would also crank up some of your darks; everything is looking very middle-grey. I think you could benefit from upping the contrast between the white of the main two ghosts and the background around them. I'm excited to see the final product!
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